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Reviewer: FalseBill Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 May 2014 00:54 Title: Hailing Frequencies Open

Wow, top marks again trekfan.
But what answer awaits Danny tomorrow?

Reviewer: CaptainSarine Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 May 2014 23:48 Title: Hailing Frequencies Open

As The Doctor would say: What? What?? WHAT?! Ok, this keeps on getting more and more confusing but in such a great way. Can't wait to see how this resolves tomorrow. Great stuff

Reviewer: Mackenzie Calhoun Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 May 2014 22:04 Title: Hailing Frequencies Open

that film noir feel continues and interesting to see how it all wraps up.

Reviewer: zeusfluff Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 May 2014 21:54 Title: Hailing Frequencies Open

Interesting twist tf. So, where to next?

I really want to know how this ends.

Day 7 is sure to be awesome.

Reviewer: jespah Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 May 2014 21:35 Title: Hailing Frequencies Open

Ah, I'm guessing that tomorrow, Danny will talk back. A LOT.

Reviewer: Miranda Fave Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 May 2014 21:23 Title: Hailing Frequencies Open

Egad! Brilliant mystery and head wrecking scratching stuff here trekfan. Really enjoying this roller coaster ride. Tomorrow we get answers, right? Right? Right?

Reviewer: Gatekeeper Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 May 2014 06:57 Title: Breaking and Entering

Wow. More and more mysterious. Can't wait to see where this is going.

Reviewer: RogueJawa Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 May 2014 01:20 Title: Breaking and Entering

Oh shit, that was quite a turn at the end. I wasn't expecting it; I mean knowing Section 31 I should have expected it, but you wrote it so convincingly that I genuinely thought he had escaped. Good job!

Reviewer: Miranda Fave Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 May 2014 00:20 Title: Breaking and Entering

Gees. This is a real mind-****! Continuing to love it trekfan my man. It keeps us guessing and at a loss as to what is going on. I keep thinking it has something to do with the Multiverse or to do with your Chronicles Universe. But regardless, I'm loving it.

Reviewer: Mackenzie Calhoun Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 May 2014 00:16 Title: Breaking and Entering

Dizzying state of affairs but I'm sure all will be resolved by weeks end. Or...maybe not...

Reviewer: Mackenzie Calhoun Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 May 2014 23:46 Title: What Had Happened Was ...

continuing to like the Section 31 angle, knowing they're everywhere and yet not. Will click onto the next piece PDQ

Reviewer: Mackenzie Calhoun Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 May 2014 23:45 Title: He Who Shall Not Be Named (But is Anyway)

punching along well, good little piece and building as it goes.

Reviewer: Mackenzie Calhoun Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 May 2014 23:39 Title: Home is Where the Crazies Aren't

curiouser and curiouser, looking forward to next part which I'll get to it.

Reviewer: CaptainSarine Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 May 2014 23:29 Title: Breaking and Entering

Woah. A true WTF moment here. I can't wait to see what is going on, you're doing a great job of stringing us along. Roll on Saturday so we finally get some answers (or will we?) :)

Reviewer: FalseBill Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 May 2014 21:34 Title: Breaking and Entering

Poor Danny, just when he thinks he got a handle on the situation, it shifts again, just what is going on?

Well done I'm enjoying this ride.

Reviewer: jespah Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 May 2014 20:29 Title: Breaking and Entering

Oh, man, Danny's having a high time of it hallucinating.

Or is he????

Reviewer: zeusfluff Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 May 2014 20:05 Title: Breaking and Entering

Danny realizes that Vick isn't real. Could be be Danny's alter ego? Hmm...

Waiting for Day 6's entry.

Reviewer: kes7 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 May 2014 04:04 Title: What Had Happened Was ...

Vick!  That was unexpected.  Can't wait to see the next twist.

Reviewer: MIck Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 May 2014 03:21 Title: What Had Happened Was ...

Oh the plot thickens, and Section 31 is up to something.  It'll be interesting to see how Danny gets out of it.

Reviewer: zeusfluff Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 May 2014 01:54 Title: What Had Happened Was ...

Another fine ficlet. Cannot wait to see where you go with this next. Wonder where Danny's off to next...

Reviewer: FalseBill Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 May 2014 01:17 Title: What Had Happened Was ...

S31 really are up to no good but I'm still hooked and want to know what the plan really was. Well done.

Reviewer: Gatekeeper Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 May 2014 01:04 Title: What Had Happened Was ...

Ah, the plot thickens. Maybe Danny's crazy and maybe the universe really was all wrong, or maybe it's a little bit of both. Or maybe it's wrong, but not in the way he was thinking...Nicely done. Can't wait to read the rest.

Reviewer: Miranda Fave Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 May 2014 23:57 Title: What Had Happened Was ...

Cripes. The sudden left turns take even more sudden left turns followed swiftly by another. We end up in circles in this instalment. So very twistyy and twisted. It's kinda unhinged. It feels like its lunacy on Danny's part save for the fact that he and Vick did do some bad and twisty things in their line of work that this may actually crazily be true and happening. Or its more mind games. Or ... I dunno ... love the fact all the options and possibilities are viable in the story context and that keeps us befuddled and hooked wanting to know the truth. Super.

Reviewer: RogueJawa Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 May 2014 20:28 Title: What Had Happened Was ...

So the insane asylum wasn't really an insane asylum. I think that almost makes it worse, like the poor guy thinks he's gone crazy but in reality it was just Section 31 playing games and performing experiments.

Reviewer: jespah Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 May 2014 20:21 Title: What Had Happened Was ...

Well, we know where we're going. Maybe.

I think Danny should trust his nose more than his ears and his eyes right now. I don't think this Vick is really Vick.

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