Reviews For Paradox
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Reviewer: trekfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jun 2015 19:37 Title: Religious Objections

Well, Levi managed to avoid the horrible timeline spawning event (and did it classically), Marci is out of the picture, and now the three primary stars are all about to meet each other in a very interesting way. I'm intrigued. Loved the confused and hesistant way Levi was acting here, completely unprepared for it all, and the interaction between Icheb and Maren is fun as usual.

I wonder how he manages to destroy this thing ... or if he just manages to convince the two that it isn't worth doing.



Author's Response:

Thank you for reviewing (this is jes). I have no idea what he's going to do next. This story might end up on Unblock the Block.

Reviewer: trekfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jun 2015 19:31 Title: Kiss of Fate

Oh. Oh, oh. Oh.

Man, this is a mess, but one I couldn't stop laughing at. A thousand different timelines launched, and all of them dreadfully bad for the universe ... but oh so fun.

Reviewer: trekfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jun 2015 19:27 Title: The Company You Keep

What a mess, but I was smiling all the way through. Levi finds himself in the most hilarious of situations ... he's about to score a homerun and doesn't even know he's playing!

Definitely get why Maren is annoyed Stratton girl, though. God, she's a pain.

Reviewer: trekfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jun 2015 19:21 Title: Nys'liet

So sweet. These two together is a rightness that is hard to find in fiction.

Team I/M approves whole-heartedly.

Reviewer: trekfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jun 2015 19:15 Title: Calculations

LOL, Levi. Trying to bed someone he just met in the past? Man, Richard Daniel's old ship sure has a strange effect on people. Charmingly awkward as usual. I wonder how he's going to lead them down a different path?

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