Date: 06 Jan 2013 22:15 Title: Forward in the Past
It was scfi...it was star trek...and it was a love story...dare I say epic?
Date: 06 Jan 2013 21:19 Title: Forward in the Past
It was great fun to do!
Date: 06 Jan 2013 21:10 Title: Forward in the Past
Wow! It's been almost a year and a half now... How times flies...
Date: 16 Sep 2011 20:16 Title: A Final Resolution
It is all about the possibilities. I like to think that love never dies. I'm a softie I suppose. :)
Date: 14 Sep 2011 13:35 Title: Guardians
It's all about home ....
Date: 13 Sep 2011 20:26 Title: Fight or Flight
Yeah thanks. Truth be told I really skimped on the space battle scene, it was the last scene I did and the one I didn't like doing because I would have to write from Kirk's POV. I put it off until last because I was quite apprehensive about writing it.
Thanks Rob for saying you can visualize my writing, when I write I really think about the scene and how it can be described. Ultimately I always go for a movieish style way of writing, and whenever possible try to really describe the surroundings in a particular scene.
[Report This]Date: 13 Sep 2011 16:02 Title: Fight or Flight
Well done...I can actually visualize your writing in my mind...very movieish!!!
Date: 13 Sep 2011 14:40 Title: Fight or Flight
Qapla indeed! Great space battle scene!
[Report This]Date: 09 Sep 2011 21:57 Title: Intimate Encounter
Oh! I love Jane Seymour! And she's got sci-fi cred (Somewhere in Time)!
This one's for Mrs. Scorpio!
Date: 08 Sep 2011 23:34 Title: Fresh Horses for Battle
Nope just something I dreamed up, it felt like something they would do. They love opera and Shakespear, and it seemed to me there was a way for them to pass the torch of wisdom with the passing of command. Something just for Captains. I came up with it while I was reviewing Twelfth Night for the story, I didn't want to use Chang quotes, or anything as done to death as Hamlet or Macbeth.
[Report This]Date: 08 Sep 2011 18:43 Title: Fresh Horses for Battle
Great part...I'm really enjoying this passing down of a book for the Klingons...is this something they do or something you came up with?
[Report This]Date: 04 Sep 2011 04:27 Title: Beyond the Veil
This was really well written LN X...I really like the depth you have brought to Craddock. I actually could 'feel' his loss. Well done!
Rob
[Report This]Date: 03 Sep 2011 02:36 Title: A Child's Toy
Man this story is getting exciting!! Pow home run Rob. I can't wait to see what happens next. Love it, love it, love it.
[Report This]Date: 02 Sep 2011 18:43 Title: A Child's Toy
Woah! Seriously good, and I really dig that picture of the planet exploding. This may sound stupid but I saw the top half of the image and just sort of ignored it.
And then when it came to the 'Mehjah'Loh, the entire planet that it was, exploded!' part. I looked down and was like awesome!. That was one amazingly placed picture.
p.s. please can I go over the chapters and correct the occasional minor mistakes that crop up from time to time? Because I saw half a dozen mistakes in this chapter. I know you four are all busy writing so won't have the time to go over the story. Just a thought you know...
p.p.s Where did you get that picture from? Was a shot from the Star Trek series, or was it digitally made? And if so who made it?
Date: 02 Sep 2011 01:21 Title: The Mark
I agree. I like where this is going. It'll be interesting to see how the Romulans will figure into this going forward.
[Report This]Date: 02 Sep 2011 00:45 Title: The Mark
I like where this is going, the situation is heating up on all fronts... except our crafty Romulan friends, where are they ?
Date: 01 Sep 2011 19:55 Title: They Don't Make Them Like They Use To
It was definitely a poor design -- ooh ....
[Report This]Date: 31 Aug 2011 14:13 Title: The Choice
Ah, and the tie-in begins!
[Report This]Date: 31 Aug 2011 13:16 Title: The Choice
"Aye sir, I'm working on it. I'll have it for ye in four hours. Before ye protest, I know ye dinnae have four hours so you'll have it in one," said Scotty,"....love it. Great nod to the future revealing of the "miracle worker's" secret formula for success.
[Report This]Date: 30 Aug 2011 13:16 Title: The Innocent Blood
Eek, another twist!
[Report This]Date: 30 Aug 2011 02:30 Title: The Innocent Blood
Brutal and Machiavellian, I love it. I can't wait to see how this plays out. Round two is on like Donkey Kong.
Date: 29 Aug 2011 22:40 Title: The Opening Move
Bum bum BUMMMM!!! Romulans!!
Date: 29 Aug 2011 22:13 Title: The Pieces Assemble
The plot thickens, and now it seems the Romulans are behind this mess. I can instantly see a situation in later chapters where both the Klingons and Kirk work together to get out of this mess...
Nice one throwing the Romulans into the fray, it really spices up the old Klingon Empire vs Federation sort of thing.
[Report This]Date: 29 Aug 2011 20:13 Title: The Pieces Assemble
Knocking it out the park Jes, man I am loving this collaboration.