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Reviewer: kes7 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Dec 2013 16:59 Title: Unexpected Artistry (Kes7’s universe)

This is so sweet.  Even without knowing what year it is, or what is going on in their lives, it feels very true to the three of them. You very much captured the dynamics between them in a lovely way. Thank you. 



Author's Response:

Oh, my pleasure. I was thinking of some earlier time on the Tesseract for the time period.

Reviewer: FalseBill Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Dec 2013 23:12 Title: Unexpected Artistry (Kes7’s universe)

Wow Jespah you’ve knock the ball out of the park with this one. You’ve managed to capture Icheb voice and reasoning so well, it only matters to him as it matters to Maren. Still the choice of song from Icheb and the Dickens quote hidden in the wordpuzzle were pitch perfect to me.

Author's Response:

Aw, thanks. It's my favorite-ever carol.

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