[Report This]Date: 05 Nov 2010 18:48 Title: Act 2, part 1
Kaycee, this is simply one of the finest and most inspired pieces of fiction I have ever read. Congratulations!
Your Resurrection theme takes Unsung Heroes in entirely appropriate, believable but constantly surprising directions. You succeed in connecting the reader to Worf’s plight using some interwoven symbolism that operates on a profound but still personal level.
Your handling of the fairly complex technology you inherited from Unsung Heroes was performed extremely well including some technical extensions you came up with on your own. You’re installing adaptive quantum phase discriminators and calibrating phase tunneling beams with the best of us now!
I'm astounded at how well you managed the many threads to your story, how they came together to produce such as a satisfying ending, and yet how well you provided some excellent jumping off points for the next chapter. I would have liked to have known more about Francisco's tattoo, and his alleged branding as a traitor, but I guess I'll have to wait!
Congratulations again on a truly welcome addition to the Star Trek HQ universe!
Samuel.