Reviewer: CeJay Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2020 20:07 Title: Episode 11.3 - Medical Office, U.S.S. Hunter

Hmmm, not sure if this was what Starlfeet had in mind with those disclosure meetings. They feel terribly awkward and bit preachy. Almost like a classroom lecture. Don't blame Hui for losing his (ridged) tongue. Would want to go something like that either.

Author's Response:

Wow - looks like I failed with this one. I was going for light hearted and slightly naughty humor.

Humor is notoriously the most difficult stuff to write. 

I'll have to think about this one to see if there's a way to tune it a little better.

Thanks!! rbs