Reviewer: CeJay Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jul 2020 19:59 Title: Episode 8.3 - The Bolian Web: Bulldog Xhot

I liked this chapter. I kept thinking, "I thought all the Bolians are dead." Didn't occur to me that the Bulldog wasn't really there, just figured he had survived somehow. Nice although sad reveal.

Author's Response:

That scene is a re-write. I initially provided all of that background through expository prose and it just dragged. Then I hit on the idea of having Captain Kelley narrate the background to his late first officer. 

Glad you liked it - Thanks!! rbs