Reviewer: Anna Amuse Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jul 2009 07:37 Title: Part Two, Chapter Four

I know it's not nice to say that when a person has just updated, but I could some more, y'know? ;-) ::grins:: Nice work. :D

Reviewer: SLWatson Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jul 2009 23:33 Title: Part Two, Chapter Four

LOL! I dunno if at 5'8", Scott could ever be considered a big man (most of the crew was taller), even if he does have a powerful set of shoulders (not counting the movie era obviously); still, I really liked your introduction of Jim to the rest, and how you're tying in episode elements from City, as well as all new stuff. Good work!

Author's Response: Yeah, I wasn't thinking of height so much as muscle and width. Let's face it, even in TV-era, the uniform is a lot tighter on Scotty than on, say, Spock. That said, I'm sure everything I get wrong about Scotty could fill a book. Thank you very much.