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Reviewer: Gibraltar Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2009 23:21 Title: Part III.

One of the Miracle Worker's first miracles... a few seconds of power, but enough to get them away.  And then a wall falls on him.

Tough Day.

I loved how you framed this battle.  The people in the engine room have no idea what's happening, only knowing that the ship is under attack and damaged.  The bridge crew's so busy nobody takes the opportunity to fill them in.  Nevertheless, Scotty gets the job done.



Author's Response: I figured that it's probably pretty rare when the engine room crew actually knows what they're up against. But, perform their miracles anyway. Thanks for the comment!

Reviewer: Mistral Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 May 2009 19:38 Title: Part III.

Very intense scene. Drives home the helplessness of the ship and the insanity of scott's plan.

Author's Response: ::nodnods:: It was... hard actually, writing it strictly from a below-decks position. Thank you.

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