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Reviewer: Robert Bruce Scott Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 29 Dec 2020 12:58 Title: Chapter 10

Akinola is jumping off the page here. Always enjoyable to see a character pop. 

Warp 3? Looks like this ship has some serious problems.

A little additional comeuppance with Mahoney and keeping the Sacajawea sidelined both fun and handy for the storyline. 

Thanks!! rbs



Author's Response: Yeah, issues abound in this scenario.

Reviewer: Shada Dukal Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Oct 2014 22:49 Title: Chapter 10

The situation is going from bad to worse, even without the Orion Syndicate around. As though Schwarzkopf’s pompous stupidity wasn’t bad enough. Now the semi-stoned Commander Mahoney can’t make head and tail of what has happened let alone to act upon it. On top of that, Akinola decides to join the party and since nepotism does not exist in Starfleet, he keeps scaring his nephew.

Author's Response: Oh don't count out nepotism just yet. If you get a chance check out 'Paternal Instincts' which explores this quite a bit. Akinola just doesn't quite believe in it.

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