Reviews For Star Crossed
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Reviewer: Robert Bruce Scott Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 28 Dec 2020 13:15 Title: Chapter 9

Very intriguing character, Ariolo. Since there's a big gap between my reading this chapter and the previous several, I will need to go back a chapter or two to pick up his physical description. 

Always handy to have a loyal defender. And yet another shade in Star's rather dark persona to have exploited this facet of his culture.

Thanks!! rbs



Author's Response: Glad you liked the Ariolo character. I think they were just a throwaway alien race in Trek, introduced to show the variety of the Federation but never really used. Probably because of the awesome looking but impractical make-up. Since I had forgotten I even used this character, a quick Google search revealed that apparently they are now considered to be a four-legged centaur style species, at least according to ST: Lower Decks. Interesting. Not the direction I went with, obviously.

Reviewer: Shada Dukal Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Oct 2014 23:41 Title: Chapter 9

Yes, this chapter answers my doubts expressed in the review of Chapter 7. Still, I think there is something more than loyalty, something ulterior and more tangible. N’ek’too can be very loyal and I want to believe that this is the case, but he can also have some scores to settle, a revenge to seek, or he might be a double agent working against Taz. His desperate determination to prove his loyalty flashes a red light.

Author's Response: Everyone on this ship seemed to have another agenda, it's not too difficult to believe that N'ek'too had one as well.

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