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Reviewer: jespah Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 May 2014 22:24 Title: Chapter 3

Listening is certainly a good start!

I am sorry that this one is not finished! Are you planning on continuing? It looks to be a good story, with a great deal of potential.

Reviewer: jespah Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 May 2014 22:21 Title: Chapter 2

Kira is big-hearted here, but she may be taking on too much. Jantha has (maybe) the right idea, but for Devina to form a short term attachment and then another might not be so easy or so good for her.

Reviewer: jespah Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 May 2014 22:16 Title: Chapter 1

An interesting beginning - the test makes sense, and it is truly necessary. They are right; how can you know what would happen under this conditions?

Reviewer: Ln X Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jan 2013 19:41 Title: Chapter 1

I'll be keeping a close eye on this story as I'm very intrigued in how Kira can bond with this troubled young lady...

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