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Reviewer: SLWalker Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2013 20:32 Title: Piece 5 - Veil

“Human, I am not embracing logic.” he joked, “I am just taking it out for a night’s entertainment. Ah, what’s this?”

That may be the best line ever. I love how you can make total unknowns endearing with the turn of a phrase. This one's interesting, though I am still as lost as the characters are. The disappearance of the Orions is interesting, if perhaps foreboding, given what they were doing.

Author's Response:

Yeah, I dig that line, too, thanks. Keleth actually shows up later in fanon, but I made him a doctor ....

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