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Reviewer: Robert Bruce Scott Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06 Nov 2020 13:27 Title: Day Eleven: Exit Music: I

Okay - having the yacht collide with the saucer, peeling the paint and stopping just short of the bridge is just pure fun. And extremely cinematic. This would make a great movie sequence.

Great closing line.

Thanks!! rbs



Author's Response: Got to get some comedic beats in here, right. And I agree, this is a scene I'd pay to watch.

Reviewer: trekfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Mar 2014 02:15 Title: Day Eleven: Exit Music: I

LOL, great landing! Deen might be the Troi of this ship. Every time she gets behind the controls of a shuttlecraft she ends up crashing it into something. A planet. A shuttle bay. A saucer section. Loved this.



Author's Response: I hadn't thought about that but you're right. She needs to be kept away from the piloting controls moving forward. Just to be safe, she probably shouldn't even be in a shuttle ever again.

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