Reviewer: Miranda Fave Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2014 19:17 Title: Chapter 6

You know, I'm sure I've said it before but it is worth the repeating, you do dialogue that is natural very well but that also serves to serve the story and move it forwards. And I like how you find the moments for communal group activity and gathering in a natural way the crew/cast together for scenes such as the larger movie nights one and the subsequent discussion. And I'm somewhat surprised at the captain's presence myself. And yeah, what has engineering got with musicals as their bag?

Author's Response:

Somebody has to be into musicals - I just see them dancing next to the big engine. :)

Thank you re the dialogue. I listen to people constantly; I'm often a wallflower. And I just try to put it out there on a page.