Date: 18 Jan 2011 05:54 Title: Assembling the Team
I like it!! Garak was very in character..and good to see him in action all these years later. Kyhryk is proving to be a very interesting original character, which is also hard to pull of in TREK FIC.
Author's Response: Thank you for reading it.
I RPGd Kyhryk as my main character in a Starfleet ship sim where he was chief of security for over a year so i have had quite some time to flesh him out. Just tweaked his background and such a bit for this role.
Date: 08 Jan 2011 00:50 Title: A New Mission
A very eclectic group here. Using a Nausicaan in a lead role isn't an easy thing to attempt. I liked the mix of this group, and the Quark cameos sprinkled in.
Your Quark dialogue was right on, and I could actually see him in my mind delivering those lines.
Keep it up, and good start!
Rob
Author's Response: Thanks Rob.
Your right Nausicaans arent easy to write for but with very little donce conerning them and most of it bad I thought why not use one in a hero role for once instead of a basic thug.
As for Quark it took a few tries to get it right so thanks for believing it sounded right.