Date: 29 May 2013 05:21 Title: Chapter 1
Spock and Chapel, right?
Even if I'm wrong, it's still a powerful story.
Author's Response: Sorry it took me so long to respond. Work has been kicking butt lately. You are correct, it is Spock and Chapel. And thanks for the review!
Author's Response: Sorry it took me so long to respond. Work has been kicking butt lately. You are correct, it is Spock and Chapel. And thanks for the review!
Date: 12 Dec 2011 23:26 Title: Chapter 1
Oh, this one was a love.
I'm a sucker for romance, and for the promise of forever. Or, at least, as close to forever as we can ever get.
Author's Response: Thanks ao much for the comments. Obviously, I am also a sucker for the forever kind of 'love.'
[Report This]Date: 26 Dec 2010 20:17 Title: Chapter 1
I enjoyed this story on the Starfleet site and am very pleased to welcome it here for others to enjoy. It’s a lovely story.
It can easily be twice as hard completing a work like the “The Visitor”. Not only do you have to tell a great story, as you have so aptly done, but at the same time must also very carefully manage the release of details of every kind, balanced to keep the interest building. Readers that read carefully will be amply rewarded.
You are indeed the Mystress of Mystery. Benedict Cumberbatch would be proud.
Date: 22 Dec 2010 05:17 Title: Chapter 1
Beautiful. Heartbreaking. And I got it right away who those two people were. *sniff* Excellent, excellent job, couched in vivid and evocative prose. Nice!
LBD
Author's Response: Thank you very much for the kind words. I am so glad you enjoyed it.
Date: 21 Dec 2010 02:58 Title: Chapter 1
Okay, this was well written!!! But who were these two people? I thought maybe it was Spock and the Romulan commander from ENTERPRISE INCIDENT. But, then again, I don't know!!!..continue!!!
Author's Response: "Think about it - all the clues are there - I love a mystery!