[Report This]Date: 17 Apr 2010 18:47 Title: Chapter 9
A happy ending to a great tale! I really liked this--awesome! :)
Author's Response: Many thanks for the reviews and interest. I'm glad you enjoyed the story.
Date: 11 Mar 2010 02:55 Title: Chapter 8
Well, its good to see they didn't leave Spock behind! But I'm left wondering: when is the captain making his grand appearance? Can't wait for more!
Date: 28 Feb 2010 20:25 Title: Chapter 7
Very interesting. Hopefully Spock can warn the landing party in time. But now that Kirk's taking action, things are bound to get more complicated.
Date: 21 Feb 2010 18:13 Title: Chapter 5
Some interesting things. "Hallucinations" of the dead; planting explosive devices with no way out; and someTHING awakened in the cavern... Good stuff!- keep going! ;)
Date: 20 Feb 2010 03:53 Title: Chapter 3
A very sticky situation for all of them--Spock, McCoy and the landing party, and for the people of Avellach. Is that shadowe they've seen perhaps Luan? Very good!--keep it up.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. Hard and tricky times ahead. :)
Date: 17 Feb 2010 01:01 Title: Chapter 1
An intruging problem, and an intrugiung solution. But since its so simple... well, something's going to have to go wrong. Keep going!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. You're right...something definitely has to go wrong....
Date: 15 Feb 2010 20:41 Title: Chapter 1
so far, so good. An interesting dilemma to be solved while Bones bitches. Thumbs up!
Author's Response: Thank you for the review... more to come soon.