Reviews For Gusts and Gales
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Reviewer: trekfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Feb 2010 04:47 Title: Gusts and Gales

Thanks Mistral! Yes, that fight was rather brutal; typo has been corrected (spaz on my part-should have caught that before) and much obliged for the point out of it.

 

I do like writing action scenes. :)

Reviewer: Mistral Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12 Feb 2010 20:38 Title: Gusts and Gales

the next to last line has a typo. That said-Jesus, dude, you rattled me with your description of the fight with the guard! I need to be more careful what I'm reading at lunchtime! Very graphic, like a punch to the gut.

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