Date: 28 May 2013 22:56 Title: Chapter 1
Just a little return to this ficlet. Had to read it again to bathe in the sublime hilarity and genius of it. I truly loved it. Fantastic characterisation too as it kept it well within character and yet you were able to bring the funny. It helped that you kept it serious and monotone and you did not play any of it up hugely.
The fact that Wes is the go-to kid on this matter and that Seven seeks out his help is hilarious in and of its own fact. Add to that the holo-suite beating up therapy. And then to top it all off, the fact Naomi is using the programme too makes me conjure an image of a Naomi secretly working behind the scenes fixing all of VOY's problems but learning from Wes to take no credit for it. So all those apparent Deflector dish saves, reversing the polarity shit on the bridge did nothing really but Naomi was in some science station on the bridge making real stuff happen. Maybe she controlled Kim? WOw. See. This is what your stuff does it makes me conjure weird ass ideas and mad notions. That's surely the definition of inspiring.
Date: 28 May 2013 22:03 Title: Chapter 1
A somewhat macabre but funny story! Plus tying Wesley and Seven into it was rather imaginative of you. I laughed out loud when Wesley confessed to creating a holodeck program where he could beat the living daylights out of his former friends and colleagues on the Enterprise!
Date: 26 Jan 2010 21:08 Title: Chapter 1
Cute. You do have a way with clever concepts...
Date: 23 Jan 2010 17:25 Title: Chapter 1
Ah the Mary-Sues anonymous meeting! Hee hee. Very good.
Author's Response:
I always feel a bit thrown when characters get blamed for decisions the writers make--like Riker not taking his own command sooner. So these stories are therapeutic.
Date: 21 Jan 2010 17:14 Title: Chapter 1
On odd combination, but it somehow worked, and I could picture them both! I laughed at the end. Nicely done!
Author's Response:
I like rehabilitating characters perceived as Mary Sues!