Date: 27 Dec 2009 19:48 Title: Chapter 2 New Breath
Well I'm two chapters in now and still enjoying what I'm reading - great to see all the first season players (Kazon, Talaxians, Vidiians) all returning!
In particular I've ALWAYS loves the Vidiians, I think they're one of the strongest creations to come out of not just Voyager but Star Trek as a whole.
I think you've captured the 'feel' of the first season perfectly!
[Report This]Date: 27 Dec 2009 19:44 Title: Chapter 1
Hi Garm Bel Iblis, just finished reading chapter one and I've enjoyed what I've read so far! Nice to see some sort of direct follow up to the events of Caretaker, and I've always enjoyed stories set in the 'early days' of Voyager's journey home more than anything further down the road.
You're writing is very strong and I have absolutely no trouble imagining the series character's speaking the words you've put in their mouths - always a good thing in a fanfic!
All in all a good, solid start!
Well done!