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Reviewer: Nerys Ghemor Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Nov 2009 06:51 Title: Chapter 1

Oh, my.  I was not expecting Dukat and the pentagram--and yet it's SO fitting.  Given what he does with the Pah-Wraiths, dabbling with an Earth devil is no suprrise either.

The "change your shirt" thing also got a laugh.  I just wish she could've shown up earlier to get him to change out of those awful one-piece THINGS he wore for the first few seasons!



Author's Response: Thanks. I actually see canon-Dukat going wherever he has to in obtaining power. Plus, I think that a Terran demon might see jurisdictional problems if he did make that purchase. I see Norman Osborn getting the same reaction from Mephisto.

Reviewer: Mistral Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 27 Oct 2009 19:37 Title: Chapter 1

The Doubter made me laugh out loud and See was so quick and clever on so many levels I had to go back and read it again. Great work and thanks for the laughs!

Author's Response: I swear one day I'm gonna write a book about helping my Mom with projects around her house and call it 'No, Your Other Left'. Spare me ghouls and demons - a mother's glare is scary enough. As for See - I doubt our resident manipulator would ever bow to another.

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