Reviewer: Mistral Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Oct 2009 19:55 Title: Chapter 1

That was chilling. The build up was well paced and the over all effect-goosebumps. Good job.

Author's Response: The Admiralty in the ADU is of course a take on the script-driven 'mad Admiral' syndrome seen on TNG and DS9, amped up with a bit of X-Files, Lovecraft, and good old anime/manga stylistic cruelty. I write by definition so many stories about how the Order hurts Peter Kirk and Saavik, but those are two kids. Showing the way it affects serving officers really brings it home, and I'm gratified to know it works.