Reviewer: Mistral Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Oct 2009 08:33 Title: Troubled Party

I liked this story-you have the right idea. I'm not sure if I liked the way you introduced your characters but they proved to be very interesting and your basic premise and the way the story developed by the end was great.

Author's Response: Thanks, Mistral! I was really uncertain if it was any good or not, considerring I wrote it so quickly. I'm glad you liked how it developed.