Date: 26 Aug 2009 19:53 Title: Part 3: Exorcisms
Cute ending and a plausible story. I'm afraid part 3 needs further editing-lots of little spelling and tense goofs, but still an enjoyable story. Good work!
Author's Response:
Thanks for the head's up Mistral. Yeah it was very rushed sorry about that. Thanks for reading and reviewing. Much appreciated.
[Report This]Date: 26 Aug 2009 19:44 Title: Part 2: Apparitions
Ok, starting to see. Is this like the beings that took over Troi and OBrien on TNG?
Author's Response:
Well I can't say for sure - but I'm pretty sure an alien of some kind like this has appeared before in trek but at time I just had to keep on writing the story so didn't go to the length of checking such details out. Lazy I know.
[Report This]Date: 26 Aug 2009 19:36 Title: Prologue and Chapter 1: Back from the Dead
Creepy. Nice build up and a good mystery. On to the rest!
Author's Response:
Thanks Mistral. Glad the build up worked.
Date: 17 Aug 2009 01:36 Title: Part 3: Exorcisms
Great story. Riveting from scary beginning to hilarious end.
Author's Response:
Thank you very much kes7, very much obliged. Obviously chuffed you thought the start was scary but equally so that the corny end was funny. Thanks for reading.
Date: 13 Aug 2009 20:53 Title: Part 3: Exorcisms
A satisfying ending with terrible PUNishment! I loved it!
Author's Response:
Sorry, dreadful pun I know but it wasn't mine it was Keresh's! Well that's my excuse and I'm sticking to it. Thanks for reading and reviewing. The ending is a little rushed but opted to go for a frantic pace in order to keep the story going.
Date: 13 Aug 2009 20:30 Title: Prologue and Chapter 1: Back from the Dead
Deliciously creepy beginning. You can't go wrong when you start off with a space version of Edgar Allen Poe's greatest fear. Can't wait to see where you take this!
Author's Response:
Oh the biggest heepy geepy ever that! The mere thought of it! Yuk. Hence why I had to get him out of there quick sharp. A bit like Garak in that I don't find tight spaces condusive to my health. Hope the direction suited and worked out. The first part is different in tone to the rest and so the story may suffer as a result.