[Report This]Date: 09 Jun 2009 21:08 Title: Chapter 13
Excellent. I didn't think she'd do the time but it gave it a "real" vibe. Well thought out, well written. Great Job!
Author's Response: Thank you! And thank you for making the effort to comment on each of the segments. I'm glad you enjoyed the story.
Date: 09 Jun 2009 21:05 Title: Chapter 12
Brave. Foolish, but brave.
Date: 09 Jun 2009 21:03 Title: Chapter 11
What the hell is Janeway doing?
Date: 09 Jun 2009 20:51 Title: Chapter 10
And a feeble strike for the defense. A little support from an old friend. And the sun will come out tomorrow. *sic*
Date: 09 Jun 2009 20:48 Title: Chapter 9
Ouch. The sense of impending doom grows.
Date: 09 Jun 2009 20:45 Title: Chapter 8
I like the interaction with B'Elanna-very thoughtful. And I agree-her and Tom would leave Starfleet upon returning. Its not their bag of tricks.
Date: 09 Jun 2009 20:41 Title: Chapter 7
What's up with the non-honeymoon? Something doesn't ring right there-lawyers know the facts. Its their stock in trade.
Date: 09 Jun 2009 20:36 Title: Chapter 6
Sad that the pursuit of justice so often blinds one to the execution of justice.
Date: 09 Jun 2009 20:33 Title: Chapter 5
Well, less damning, I guess.
Date: 09 Jun 2009 20:28 Title: Chapter 4
I liked this-it rang very true to the characters. I can hear Beltran delivering his lines.
Date: 09 Jun 2009 20:24 Title: Chapter 3
Another nail. So typical of bureaucrats-chip away at the hero's status.
Date: 09 Jun 2009 20:20 Title: Chapter 2
Complicated-and damning testimony. You seem to have researched this rather well....
Date: 09 Jun 2009 20:12 Title: Chapter 1
Interesting opening. I look forward to seeing where it goes.
Date: 08 Jun 2009 06:09 Title: Chapter 3
Yeah. Ouch. That could have gone much better...
Pretty damning testimony from Chakotay, and the fact that he keeps backtracking and trying to clarify his responses only appears to make the matter worse.
Author's Response: He really did mean well, but you know what they say about good intentions. Honestly, I don't see how his testimony would have come out any other way and still be in keeping with what actually happened.
Date: 01 Jun 2009 23:26 Title: Chapter 2
Yeesh. Janeway's attorney's opener was tepid at best, and Captain Mendez's opening remarks and questioning of the first witness were nothing short of scathing. Janeway had better hope something in this equation changes dramatically... and soon.
Well done. :)
Author's Response: Considering this is the *second* time I've put poor Janeway on trial, yeah, things aren't looking too good, are they? Thanks for the review!
Date: 01 Jun 2009 20:21 Title: Chapter 1
I'm glad to see Starfleet holding Janeway accountable for some of the more unsavory events during Voyager's journey home. I always felt there should have been more long-term fallout between Janeway and Chakotay over the incident with Lessing, but as usual, it was never mentioned again.
Terrific stuff so far. I can't wait to see where you take it.
Author's Response: As I said, this was the one act of hers I couldn't just wave away and it was a real disappointment not to get repercussions/follow-ups after the crew returned home in canon. Glad you're enjoying it.