Reviewer: SLWalker Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Feb 2023 18:41 Title: Chapter 1

Whew, damn, that was action from start to finish. I definitely feel for Odell, because being told to stick around while people are trying to murder you is not exactly good for a body or mind, and then you've got Kirk flinging his hands around thoughtlessly there. But the pacing was breathlessly fast. Nicely done!