Date: 03 Mar 2010 21:31 Title: Gravity
I'm blinking my eyes here convinced that I was in the dark myself reading that. I don't know how you do it but you can sell a scene so perfectly and efficiently. I feel like I ought to fumble around for a light switch. Bet Corry had thought of that afterwards himself once he got the recieving end of Scotty's fist. But from the off it seems that Cory had a feel for Scotty and looked out for his better needs. Alas, doesn;t seem it always works out. Anyway, the ending carried a real 'punch'
[Report This]Date: 03 Mar 2010 21:10 Title: Gravity
Very well written. Fits its place.
Date: 27 Mar 2009 15:45 Title: Gravity
This story still begs for its continuation. LOL! I know I rambled at length, and it's 'canon', but it is still an awesome story -- the ending almost hits a breathless kind of intensity. Poor Corry. ::laughs:: You gotta admire the man's patience and persistence.
[Report This]Date: 27 Mar 2009 13:13 Title: Gravity
I enjoyed the "charming young guy´s" dynamic mind. From childhood memories to his roommate, his thoughts were fresh air to me. You gave us a good tour there. Thanks.
V.