Date: 29 May 2015 07:00 Title: End
Wow. That was deliciously fucked up on so many levels, and I knew it had to be her. I knew it and I completely and totally did not see this ending coming anyway, which meant you just took me on one Hell of a ride. It would be a Harrison to end her, though. It would have to be. Well done!
Date: 25 May 2015 12:30 Title: End
Excuse me while I retrieve the pieces of my mind from the floor. Twisted, depraved? Yes. But, well executed. Better than a ride at a theme park. Bravo.
Date: 25 May 2015 12:26 Title: Genesis
Now, there's the act of a desperate man. And a pretty-much-literate cliff hanger.
Date: 25 May 2015 12:20 Title: Breakfast
All I can think is that they must have one awfully messed up family tree.
Date: 25 May 2015 12:16 Title: Maria
This is so twisted, my brain is trying to unravel itself! Still, the "I'm your father', is possibly a better reveal than Darth Vader!
Date: 25 May 2015 12:09 Title: Hello
Well, that raised more questions than it answered...
Date: 25 May 2015 12:05 Title: Darkness
I agree with the other reviewers: set phasers to creeeepy. There's some very effective use of short sentences throughout this which adds to the edginess of it all.
Date: 25 May 2015 11:59 Title: Broken
Wow, this is a really intense beginning - there's emotional impact right from the start. So many questions... a really, really awesome first chapter!
Date: 24 May 2015 03:19 Title: End
Most disturbing abortion ever. Yikes.
Well, that was one hell of a ride into the bowels of twisted depravity. I wonder how his birthmother will feel about all of this, or if she'll ever know what happened.
Date: 23 May 2015 12:22 Title: End
Ick.
A twisted end to a twisted story.
Date: 23 May 2015 12:19 Title: Genesis
Wait. For a second there I thought he was running at her because he was happy and wanted this. Instead, he threw them both in oblivion. Phew.
Date: 23 May 2015 12:18 Title: End
:O Don't really have much more to say than that. Cold, cold, cold. And twisted. And dark. If Kes is the happy flashdancer this time around you're definitely bringing the grimdark! A really intriguing series here TF, full of twists, turns and OMG moments. Great, twisted, squeam-inducing stuff! :)
Date: 23 May 2015 12:15 Title: Genesis
Wait what? So not expecting that ending! I tell you what if we ever give out extra awards and decide to anoint the most twisted of the ficlet flashdances, this one will win by a mile! :) Great job again!
Date: 23 May 2015 12:13 Title: Breakfast
Okay this is so twisted in so many ways... And yet you make it work! :) I like how you've written Henry, especially the "All I have left are jokes" line. Both smart-ass and full of despair at the same time. And with the promise of business to take care of... Oh this can't end well!
[Report This]Date: 23 May 2015 10:16 Title: End
Oh and the end comes bitterly. A release to end all releases! Well done!
Date: 22 May 2015 12:32 Title: Genesis
Oh, that's good and twisty. King of Character Torture!!
Date: 22 May 2015 04:39 Title: Genesis
I'm thinking Maria is harder to kill than that. I'm also wondering why in the world she couldn't just take a sperm sample. She makes so much extra work for herself by being a sick twisted bitch. Is she just really bored? Lonely? I think she needs a hobby or a pet. Who wants to chip in a few bucks to get Maria a chihuahua?
Date: 21 May 2015 23:23 Title: Breakfast
Knew she had something else planned. What? Haven't the foggiest. Intrigued to find out.
Date: 21 May 2015 18:41 Title: Breakfast
Game of Thrones called. They want their incest back. :D
Date: 21 May 2015 12:08 Title: Breakfast
Egad. Well, he is young. But still.
Waiting for the next twisted installment ....
Date: 21 May 2015 04:12 Title: Breakfast
"He felt sick and he wasn't sure why; was it because of how everything happened? Was it because she was his father? Or was it because he liked it?"
Um, yes to both? Good heavens.
22 hours of sex with ... well, how shall I refer to her. His grandfather's rapist? His mother's rapist? His father? She's all that and more. Yikes. Maria's ability to induce weapons-grade Stockholm Syndrome in her victims is chilling. Nasty stuff.
[Report This]Date: 20 May 2015 21:23 Title: Maria
Quite the sci-fi style revelation in Henry finding out his father is a woman. :)
Date: 20 May 2015 21:14 Title: Broken
Ouch! Very gut-wrenching teaser to what looks like an adventure where one's whole sense of reality is shattered.
Date: 20 May 2015 17:42 Title: Maria
Yup, Maria is not so much evil as twisted. That bunny boiler mentality to a whole new level. Talk about stalking. But it is also unnerving as to what her agenda is with Henry (other than the straight forward agenda on the cards at the moment) because with Maria there's always the possibilty of something else of needed Hank/Henry for some other endgame. Mind games and DNA fucking about aside. Twisted. Sick. To be honest, it's what I expect of you trekfan ;)
Date: 20 May 2015 16:00 Title: Maria
Man this gets more and more twisted! Definitely going to have to look up Maria's other appearances now! Great job and can't wait to see what happens next!