Reviewer: jespah Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Feb 2015 02:44 Title: Chapter 1

Aww, that's lovely.

I have to admit, the present tense threw me a bit. I find it odd but that's me, not you or your writing. 

Things happen quickly, to be sure, but these are people who have known each other for a long time. I loved her line about not giving him four kids. Good going, Beverly.

Author's Response: I know it's a bit odd, but I prefer to use the present tense. Thanks. I hope you continue with the series.