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Reviewer: M C Pehrson Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Sep 2014 19:25 Title: Chapter 2: Shut Out

As always, I enjoyed the relationships in this loving family. Those are mighty big dogs for a starship. How about a nice Chihuahua? Oh, wait. Is there such a thing as a nice chihuahua...? They might call it "Nippy".



Author's Response:

Somehow, I see Riker as a man that likes big dogs, seeing him with a Chihuahua doesn't really work. I intend to weave these dogs into the story as it progresses. There will be need for them later on. I will be revealing what's going on with Kaiti in the next chapter or so, and how the rest of the family deals with what's going on. 

Reviewer: M C Pehrson Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Sep 2014 16:45 Title: Chapter 1: First Day of School

Okay, I'm really wondering what is going on with Kaiti. Looks like she got sent home from school early? And Deanna knows...

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