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Reviewer: Miranda Fave Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2014 01:33 Title: Chapter 1: Transfixed by daddy's Uniform

Aw. Yes, very sweet but it was a little glimpse int he young Riker family and of course offers up a little insight into Betazoid abiliites too. 



Author's Response:

Thanks MF! Glad you liked it! I tried to add a little bit of Troi's abilities in there too. Originally it was going to be Laura somehow getting a word or feeling across to her father, but that didn't pan out the way I wanted it, so I just stuck with what I wrote. I might change gears for the rest of the prompt challenge. 

Reviewer: M C Pehrson Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2014 22:59 Title: Chapter 1: Transfixed by daddy's Uniform

A tender moment for Daddy and his girl.



Author's Response:

Thanks M C! Glad you liked it. I have more up my sleeve, but I might change tactics in the next few days. 

Reviewer: FalseBill Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2014 21:52 Title: Chapter 1: Transfixed by daddy's Uniform

A very sweet story and well written as always.

Author's Response:

Thanks Bill! I had this image in my head while I was trying to fall asleep last night so I put it down on paper. 

Reviewer: jespah Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2014 20:15 Title: Chapter 1: Transfixed by daddy's Uniform

Aw, another sweet, warm, family scene! :)



Author's Response:

Thanks jes! I feel like I excel more at the drama and fluff scenes. Romance I tend to keep a tight lock on. There are places I could go with romance, but heh, alas, I'd rather keep some of those plot bunnies tightly locked away in the back of my mind. 

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