Reviews For A Sacred Trust Broken
Reviewer: M C Pehrson Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Mar 2015 16:38 Title: Chapter 3: Retelling of the Past/Trouble
Date: 11 Mar 2015 16:38 Title: Chapter 3: Retelling of the Past/Trouble
Only the beginning stage. It looks like Will has some rough times ahead. And he's worried about Laura being with Lwaxana. Yes, Eric had mentioned Deanna's mother. What's going on here?
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Date: 11 Mar 2015 16:33 Title: Chapter 2: The Meeting
Date: 11 Mar 2015 16:33 Title: Chapter 2: The Meeting
A revelation for Deanna. Will is tormented by his past, yet feels something amiss with Sartos. You've created a mystery here.
Reviewer: M C Pehrson Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2014 23:10 Title: Chapter 1: A Sacred Trust Broken
Author's Response: Not at all. Be my guest. I had fun writing this first chapter.
Date: 04 Jun 2014 23:10 Title: Chapter 1: A Sacred Trust Broken
These moments with Will and his daughter are so sweet. He is such a great dad. Would he mind if I cloned him?
Author's Response: Not at all. Be my guest. I had fun writing this first chapter.