Date: 21 May 2014 03:08 Title: Chapter 1: Chaos Erupts
Love the scene with Riker and his (growing) family. Don't like the Borg at all. But it is deliciously suspenseful that you chose to have Borg appear in one of the most vulnerable places on the ship. Quite a cliff hanger you left us with--looking forward to more.
Date: 21 May 2014 00:02 Title: Chapter 1: Chaos Erupts
What a day for Riker! He'll never forget...for as long as he lives. And how long, praytell, is that? BORG!! What happens next? Please don't tell me that we're going to end up with a baby Borg?
Author's Response: Well you are correct with your last sentence and not correct. You'll see. I have a few tricks up my sleeve. I have the next part for Day 4 written and will be posted tonight after work. I'm already working on day 5 right now.
Date: 20 May 2014 23:45 Title: Chapter 1: Chaos Erupts
Now that is a cliff-hanger, Still I expect Riker to defend his family successfully.
Author's Response: Thanks FalseBill. I've already got the next part for this finished for Day 4. Will post it later after I get back from work. Working on Day 5's entry right now.
Date: 20 May 2014 18:35 Title: Chapter 1: Chaos Erupts
?!?!?!?! BORG?!
I am now thoroughly worried about Riker.
Nice work capturing the birth but the Borg? Jeez.
Author's Response: Thanks TF. I wanted to try something different, to shake things up. Wait and see what I have in store for Day 4.
Date: 20 May 2014 18:34 Title: Chapter 1: Chaos Erupts
Oh my God! That is one hell of a cliffhanger. What happens next? What? WHAT?! :)
Great stuff.
Author's Response: Already got the second chapter ficlet written. Will be posted when I get home from work tonight.
Date: 20 May 2014 16:36 Title: Chapter 1: Chaos Erupts
Wait, WHAT?! How can you leave it like that? Talk about a cliffhanger.
Author's Response: I will be continuing this hopefully for the rest of the ficlet flashdance.
Date: 20 May 2014 13:54 Title: Chapter 1: Chaos Erupts
Eek! Well, this is a cliffhanger - I hope you'll write more of this one.
Author's Response: Of course, I'm think of continuing on this one for the rest of the week possibly. There are just so many ways I can go with it.
Date: 20 May 2014 11:16 Title: Chapter 1: Chaos Erupts
That escalated quickly! Not only does Riker now have his hands full with three daughters, but he has his hands full with Borg as well. :P
Author's Response: Thanks Rogue. The idea popped into my head sometime yesterday afternoon and I absolutely ran with it. Just wait until part 2 for tomorrow.
Date: 20 May 2014 10:35 Title: Chapter 1: Chaos Erupts
OH CRAP! Did not see that coming at all. Well played!
Author's Response: Thanks. I wanted to try something a bit different from the fluff I was writing for the last couple of entries. Just wait for Day 4's continuation.
Date: 20 May 2014 08:56 Title: Chapter 1: Chaos Erupts
Ugh! My Gods that is a hell of an ending. Something tells me they aren't there to offer cigars. Damn. Riker, Deanna and Crusher caught at their most vulnerable and in what should have been a moment of blissful happiness.
Author's Response: Glad you liked it MF. Just wait and see what I have in store for Day 4.