Date: 21 May 2014 19:34 Title: Voyager: The Princess
Awesome read, Phoenix! Such a great retelling of Seven joining the Voyager crew, and being stolen away, in fairy tale/dream form. Brilliant. :)
Date: 21 May 2014 07:02 Title: Next Generation: The Provoked
"Picard never hit me!"
Guess he just wasn't pressing the right buttons. Great job!
Date: 21 May 2014 02:56 Title: Next Generation: The Provoked
Hmmm. Picard as a female. Interesting, but I'll bet it didn't make the Captain happy. At least Q undid the changes.
Looking forward to tomorrow's installment.
Date: 20 May 2014 23:32 Title: Next Generation: The Provoked
Ah Q. I should say Q the nosy. Wow. To make Picard angry. The man hardly ever get's angry.
Thanks for this little piece. I look forward to seeing what you come up with in Day 4.
Date: 20 May 2014 23:20 Title: Next Generation: The Provoked
Loved this so much. So much win! Of course any series called Archnemesis had to include Picard v Q. You did a great job of writing these characters, I could totally see this scene playing out and the little throwback to Q's encounter with Sisko was priceless. A fantastic piece. Can't wait to see what the other combinations are going to be!
Date: 20 May 2014 23:11 Title: Next Generation: The Provoked
Interesting tale. An entertaining tale.
Date: 20 May 2014 23:08 Title: Voyager: The Princess
Big like. Nice retelling of the Voyager/Borg/Undine(8472) Arc as a fairy tale.
Author's Response: Thanks! This may be the one I expand a little bit more, I feel like there a bunch of little details I could add to make that tale a bit more fun.
Date: 20 May 2014 23:04 Title: Next Generation: The Provoked
<3
Now I'm imagining if the changes had never been reversed! Now that would be an AU. Hee, hee. This was great. And another perfect nemesis choice.
Date: 20 May 2014 22:02 Title: Next Generation: The Provoked
Haha. Q turned him into a girl. I'm actually surprised it pissed him off so badly. He seems too politically correct for that.
Q was a perfect selection for Picard's archnemesis, though. The man who introduced him to the Borg. What a jerk.
Author's Response: I tried to make it at least a bit subtle what Q was up to, I hope I didn't completely blow it. And indeed, how could I write something like this and NOT have a scene with Picard and Q?
Date: 20 May 2014 21:54 Title: Next Generation: The Provoked
Oh, Q. Nothing like a little gender swap (I think?) to piss off Picard.
Date: 20 May 2014 21:50 Title: Next Generation: The Provoked
Oh Q! You're so mean!!!
Date: 20 May 2014 21:11 Title: Voyager: The Princess
Ha. What a dream for Seven to have. Thanks for sharing this.
Cannot wait to see what you come up with next.
Date: 20 May 2014 18:25 Title: Voyager: The Princess
That was brilliant. Love the fairy tale take on Seven's arc. And the ending ... I laughed. Neelix's cooking'll give you nightmares every time.
Date: 20 May 2014 18:13 Title: Voyager: The Princess
Bravo. BRAVO. Well done on a fairy tale twist here ... about mid-way through I thought this was about Seven and Voyager and you did such a great job. Really impressed (and a tad envious). I may have to use this as a reference work for other things ... *applause*
Date: 20 May 2014 14:03 Title: Voyager: The Princess
That damned curry!
It took me a while to realize who the Empress was (I've got ENT on the brain).
Date: 20 May 2014 13:31 Title: Voyager: The Princess
Loved this. Such a great idea, why did nobody think of this before?! You did a great job of transposing the Seven storyline into a fairytale, I was expecting at the end it to be a story Neelix was telling Naomi. But the Seven dream sequence works as well. Really well done!
Date: 20 May 2014 08:02 Title: Voyager: The Princess
DUDE! That was AWESOME! I loved it!! That was an incredible way to write this, and completely unexpected for Seven! Awesome job!
Date: 20 May 2014 07:55 Title: Voyager: The Princess
Wow, neat twist on the arch nemesis theme here with it being a nightmare rendered by Seven but a heck of a fairy tale parallel going on there. For a bit I thought it was going to be some civilisation 's retellingof voyager and Borg through more primitive eyes. Nicely done, captivated me.
Date: 19 May 2014 22:47 Title: Original Series: The Doc
Wonderful, that an excellent McCoy Scene.
Date: 19 May 2014 21:46 Title: Original Series: The Doc
Nice little piece and capturing two of the Trinity very well.
Date: 19 May 2014 16:30 Title: Original Series: The Doc
LOL. I love the way McCoy just let's his dislike roll out here. Great writing between the two and banter, you nailed them. Poor Bones ... his rivals finding one another at dinner.
Date: 19 May 2014 16:18 Title: Original Series: The Doc
I love the back and forth banter here! And that was a great wrap-up line, too. Good voice, good use of character, great ending. The only thing I gotta say (sorry, T), is that you went 15-16 words over limit, so unfortunately can't qualify. I double checked it. But keep writing, man! I wanna see more from you!
Author's Response: Huh, it's odd because when I wrote it in Word, it was 500 words exactly. I think the HTML tags may have pushed it over. But thanks for the feedback!
Date: 19 May 2014 15:36 Title: Original Series: The Doc
Hahaha! This was a great scene. I love McCoy when he's pissed off, which is pretty much all the damn time. And the last line was perfection.
Date: 19 May 2014 11:27 Title: Original Series: The Doc
Laughed out loud at the end of that one! You nailed McCoy's voice here TP, that perfect mix of Southern gentleman and curmudgeon. I love the concept you have here, seeing various characters encountering their archnemesis - it has great potential for funny little stories like this one and more serious fare. I look forward to seeing where you take it.
Good job!
Date: 19 May 2014 09:13 Title: Original Series: The Doc
LOL! Loved it. Pure priceless McCoy at his best conveyed so fantastically by your writing and the choice of scene perfect. It is funny how Kirk needles at McCoy upon realising her name and then to cap it all Spock and she meet. Perfect zinger f a last line. Great idea for the week promising lots of intriguing takes and perspectives. And strange that McCoy hasn't realised that her faults have played their part in improving his work.
Author's Response: Thank you! I sort of intended that as a subtext as in his rivalry with Spock, he realizes they have a point most of the time, but he doesn't like admitting he's wrong.