Date: 24 May 2014 02:23 Title: Alternate Original Series: The Avenger
Nero. Well done communicating the feelings here.
Date: 24 May 2014 02:22 Title: Enterprise: The Rivals
Ah, COD. Still making people rage even in the future. :)
Date: 24 May 2014 01:13 Title: Alternate Original Series: The Avenger
Oh, Nero - or at least Nero's memory - you're a persistent lunatic. And a downright frightening one to boot.
Date: 24 May 2014 01:01 Title: Alternate Original Series: The Avenger
Well Done, a good AOS scene revisit and Spock suffering till he cross path with Kirk again.
Well Done.
Date: 24 May 2014 00:58 Title: Alternate Original Series: The Avenger
feel for Spock and the death of his homeworld. Initially I actually thought this might (as it started) be the events of "All Our Yesterdays" but all the same a crushing piece. The weight of a world upon ones shoulders.
Date: 24 May 2014 00:58 Title: Enterprise: The Rivals
Lol, nice twist on your theme.
well done again.
Date: 24 May 2014 00:31 Title: Alternate Original Series: The Avenger
I can really feel Spock's various emotions here in this piece. The use of all capitals for some pieces of this really add to what is going on in the scene you've set up as a whole.
Another excellent installment.
Day 7 can't come fast enough.
Date: 24 May 2014 00:30 Title: Alternate Original Series: The Avenger
Nice! Both the nods back to the original continuity and Nero's taunting of Spock were very well done. Have really enjoyed all of these, look forward to seeing what you do last!
Date: 24 May 2014 00:10 Title: Alternate Original Series: The Avenger
Firstly, the formating is so striking and actually in its own way the ordering of it, the structure, the bold and capitalisation of the letters works as part contrast to the tumult Spock has to be feeling and fitting to the overwhelming loss he is surely swamped by. A terrific snapshot chosen and effectively presented here. You leave us to ponder just what Spock is feeling and thinking and in many ways that works as being so much more effective because the character of Spcok (and Nimoy's acting) is such that we are all so often conjecturing his inner soul. Well done.
Date: 23 May 2014 10:37 Title: Enterprise: The Rivals
Haha! Love it. As a retro gamer myself I can sympathize with them. T'Pol's reaction is SOOOOO T'Pol. :P I can totally see Reed and Tucker playing Call of Duty together.
Date: 23 May 2014 09:58 Title: Enterprise: The Rivals
Here hee! Really enjoyed that. Especially. With T'Pol narrating on things over their shoulder.
Date: 23 May 2014 09:53 Title: Enterprise: The Rivals
This really made me laugh! You've done a good job of combining humorous ficlets with more serious ones in this series. Nice to know "Calla Duty" is still around even after the devastation of WW3 and to see these archnemeses handling things in a virtual environment at least. Good job!
Date: 23 May 2014 08:25 Title: Enterprise: The Rivals
Now that is priceless. Seeing Commander Tucker and Reed playing video games. I had to laugh at that.
Nice setup.
Can't wait to see what you bring for Day 6.
Date: 23 May 2014 07:00 Title: Enterprise: The Rivals
I'll bet video games look quite a bit different after WWIII. Interesting twist. Enjoyed reading.
Date: 23 May 2014 03:40 Title: Enterprise: The Rivals
Oh, you know I always love to see Reed. :) Thumbs up!
Date: 23 May 2014 01:23 Title: Deep Space Nine: The Unknown
Haha! I love that last line. Brilliant, man I hate Cardassians... except Garak.
Date: 22 May 2014 03:58 Title: Deep Space Nine: The Unknown
Ouch.
Date: 22 May 2014 01:20 Title: Deep Space Nine: The Unknown
Again well done, nice to see Kira kill an arch-nemesis without even being aware of it.
Well done.
Date: 22 May 2014 01:10 Title: Deep Space Nine: The Unknown
And the hunter becomes the hunted. Nice twist to this little story. I want to see what happens next.
Date: 22 May 2014 00:07 Title: Deep Space Nine: The Unknown
Loved the twist about of nemesis perspectives and again a fitting choice selected and told in another stellar fashion. Oh plain joyous to read as it sings off the page. And that cold discompassionate Resistance fighter Kira. Strength tempered by pain, blood, anguish and maybe shame and yet in a cause. It bespeaks the duality of her conflicted and intriguing nature. Super.
Date: 21 May 2014 23:28 Title: Deep Space Nine: The Unknown
Nice twist to have the main character be a 'bad guy'. Shame that good taste precludes describing what would have been an entirely justified death! I like Nerys' offhand reaction here, though it is also tragic that at such a young age she is already so blaze about death. I'm loving this series TPhoenix, can't wait to read the others!
Date: 21 May 2014 23:21 Title: Deep Space Nine: The Unknown
Eek! Now I have some new nightmare fodder.
Date: 21 May 2014 23:20 Title: Deep Space Nine: The Unknown
Another great piece here TPhoenix.
You've drawn me into this story.
Thanks for sharing this with us.
Date: 21 May 2014 22:57 Title: Deep Space Nine: The Unknown
Oh, Kira. You excelled at killing Cardassians. Well done describing what was going to be a glorious kill but instead turned into an inglorious death.
Date: 21 May 2014 19:39 Title: Next Generation: The Provoked
Bwahahaha! It's about time Picard punched Q. I mean I've always liked that Picard took the high road, but sometimes Q is just so frustrating that I want Picard to surprise him and knock him out. :P