Date: 28 Mar 2014 01:48 Title: San Francisco 2347
Lovely story you have here! You kept everyone in character. I look forward to more from you!
Thanks!
Author's Response: thank you very much. I have a fair bit for Crusher hereabouts but hopefully there'll be more in time.
Date: 14 Dec 2013 03:19 Title: San Francisco 2347
You already know what I think - I love it. A sweet, slice-of-life story about a young couple in love, trying to find a way to make the holiday special for them. I so love it that even though Beverly had a star that belonged to her mother, she found a tree-topper with Jack, one to start a tradition in what would soon be their own family.
This fully encompasses the spirit of the challenge, and I would hope and imagine that this angel will hold special meaning and significance for Beverly after Jack's death, and will somehow make her realize that his spirit is with her and Wesley, even if he isn't.
Truly a beautiful piece.
Author's Response: thank you most kindly. Warms the cockles to see people getting more from a story than I sometimes think. Truly a writer's curse. I half did think of Deep Silence when writing of this new ornament. Perhaps it's back on Earth rather than Enterprise and if that was the case, it being on Enterprise, she rescued it from the wreckage. Thanks again
Date: 12 Dec 2013 22:08 Title: San Francisco 2347
That’s is an excellent little story.
The Crushers first Christmas, and their hunt for the all-important tree-topping angel. As always a good prose, which was easy to read and Beverley voice ring clear and true as usual. Glad you managed to get the dancing doctor bit it and the kissing under the mistletoe at the end.
Author's Response: my thanks. Oddly I've not hinted at her dancing past much even though supposedly she did it at the academy. My Beverly seems to be an introspective person so writing Jack is a bit odd.
Whether San Francisco will still have cubbyholes in 2347 is another matter.
Date: 10 Dec 2013 22:00 Title: San Francisco 2347
Awww, sweet and definitely a favorite thing!!
Author's Response: thank you. I confess it started off as comic then I feared it'd veer into dark but though not the best it did the trick. :)
Date: 10 Dec 2013 20:27 Title: San Francisco 2347
I loved this piece. You stay so true to Beverly's personality. A beautiful holiday story of a couple just starting out in life. I feel privileged to have shared the moment with them.
Author's Response: Bless you indeed, I'm glad it went alright to the end. I'm sure the 24th Century would be a little different if not vastly but maybe for a new couple some things don't change.
Author's Response: Bless you indeed, I'm glad it went alright to the end. I'm sure the 24th Century would be a little different if not vastly but maybe for a new couple some things don't change.