Date: 10 Dec 2013 06:26 Title: Chapter 1
"Of course, he could have detailed out at least some of how that happened biologically. But, in the end, he didn't want to. He didn't want to quantify something so beautiful. Didn't want to turn something so amazing into a scientific discourse."
That was beautiful. And his knowledge of the "onesie" made me smile. A beautiful snapshot of a fledgling family.
Author's Response: Thanks! Another oldie-but-held up okay.
Date: 01 Dec 2013 00:39 Title: Chapter 1
Aw, so lovely; a moment captured forever, as the image but also as Corry's memory. Lovingly well done!
Date: 12 Sep 2013 01:07 Title: Chapter 1
That was absolutely beautiful, and so true to life. My oldest is twenty-three, but I remember those days like they were yesterday. ::chuckles:: Yes, we could have waited on the crib and nursery for our second. ;-) Seriously though, a great window into the changing life of a family of two that was just expanded to three. Stirred powerful memories, and emotions. Thank you for that.
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: 09 Sep 2013 23:16 Title: Chapter 1
Lovely little scene you’ve done here of Corry and family here. I’m sure Scotty will appreciate the pictures when he gets them. I think you’ve done your usual good job of keeping Corry him and yet at he same time show his growth as his world changes.
Abby and Alice are loved and the fact he when and got the mini-bed when the nursery was done and accept Alice wasn’t going to be that type of Child, show he’s going to be a fine father to his daughter.
A very short and sweet story but which is another little gem of yours in this archive.
Author's Response: Thank you. I remember writing this when my youngest child was somewhere around the same age Allie is here, so it's much appreciated.
Date: 24 Aug 2013 08:10 Title: Chapter 1
A nice, serene little scene of one of those perfectly captured moments of a young, first time father. All of it rings absolutly true.
I'm kinda thankful this is set in the distant future. If this were a contemporary story, this litte Kodak moment would have ended with Cory's irresistible urge to share, tweet and facebook it all.
Author's Response: LOL! I dunno, Cor probably would do the same thing he does here. He's sort of timeless like that. Thanks so much!