Reviewer: SLWalker Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jul 2013 04:59 Title: Chapter 1

Hank. Oh Hank. I love him looking back, and I feel for him for the sake of lost friends, and I like that he had mixed feelings there about Talia, and I like that he kept the picture. And Sarah, OMG. She's like... a girl, part-Andorian version of my son! Want is definitely a word you hear ALL OF THE TIME as a parent of young children, and you nailed it.

Author's Response:

Yes, Hank did have some feelings for Talia, but he lost a lot of people in the war. More than he'd care to remember really. Telling his children these types of stories kinda helps remember them in a way that's not so painful. Thanks for the review. :)