Reviewer: SLWalker Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jul 2013 04:43 Title: Chapter 1

I liked it the first time I read it. And it's still good. I still think you handled Hank's trauma well, and that you wrote this particularly well. Sex is a massively vulnerable place to be; I can think of few places moreso, and that's nerve-wracking even when you haven't been hurt and violated like Hank was. That he's scared like this? So very human.

Author's Response:

It was my shot in the dark, this one. As then, I still feel now massively uncomfortable with writing the two of them like that. It's very much different for both of them and me. But I'm glad the piece came out well and I'm happy you found that it worked. Thanks for the review :)