Date: 26 May 2013 16:29 Title: Chapter 4
Not to knock Scotty or anything, but I hope his ship fails. I'm really enjoying their adventures here. This is sheer genius, I tell ya.
Date: 26 May 2013 16:23 Title: Chapter 3
OMG! Now there's an image that hurts--in more ways than one, I'm sure...;-)
Date: 26 May 2013 16:19 Title: Chapter 2
Best line: "Spock shifted on his heels. He wasn't used to wearing them yet." Priceless. And red-shirts seem to be able to get into trouble no matter the setting. Can't wait to see what Scotty is gonna build out of coconut shells. ;-)
Date: 26 May 2013 16:12 Title: Chapter 1
What a hoot! Something tells me this is gonna be a fun ride. Spock as Ginger?! Who'da thunk it? ;-)
Date: 26 May 2013 03:12 Title: Chapter 4
Please tell me that Uhura, Chapel and Rand will be wearing grass skirts when they return.
Date: 26 May 2013 02:38 Title: Chapter 4
This is whacked out and of course Scotty could do anything with a coconut, in part because sometimes his head resembles one. XD Great work!
Date: 26 May 2013 02:35 Title: Chapter 4
Just love, love, love, love, love, love, love, love this.
Date: 26 May 2013 02:23 Title: Chapter 4
...I really do adore your mind, you know. XD
Date: 23 May 2013 13:08 Title: Chapter 3
I would have expected Kirk to ask for Scotty's *biggest* coconut shell! I can foresee the potential for a serious accident if the shells make a hoofbeat clopping noise when he walks!
Date: 23 May 2013 13:04 Title: Chapter 2
Well, at least Scotty isn't using this as an opportunity for a lifestyle change! A fun read.
Date: 23 May 2013 12:51 Title: Chapter 1
Spock as Ginger? Well that's spoiled *that* childhood fantasy! ('v') I wonder what else he has in the closet?
Date: 23 May 2013 01:42 Title: Chapter 3
Comedy genius. And as crazy, funny and parody like as it is it fits the voices so well and I see the actors playing the characters. With incharacter stuff matched with outofcharacter stuff - from Sulu's oh my to Kirk's thought:
Oh, sure, eventually they'd have to put together a rudimentary form of government (with Kirk at the helm, of course).
This is just amazing. I did say comedy genius yes. And yes, white coat men - yeah she's over here. She put Kirk in a coconut thong.
Date: 22 May 2013 14:41 Title: Chapter 3
YES! Coconut thong FTW!
Date: 22 May 2013 05:47 Title: Chapter 3
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Oh, my!
That was awesome. Kirk in a coconut thong ... I know he's working it like a pro. Janice Rand is currently screaming at the top of her lungs, wherever she is, about this.
Date: 22 May 2013 04:55 Title: Chapter 3
Kirk being all agitated because he can't do anything is so him. But it's the bleed over of Shirtless Shatner at the end, wearing a coconut thong, that completely makes this the best thing since sliced bread. I love it.
Date: 22 May 2013 04:22 Title: Chapter 3
And, at the last line, I am now DED.
Date: 22 May 2013 00:43 Title: Chapter 2
Comedy is timing and that's hard to do in writing. Not so for you timelady. You are a crazed loon for writing this stuff but boys can you write and are you clever.
Date: 21 May 2013 16:48 Title: Chapter 2
Coconuts!!
I await the inevitable coconut bra on ... someone.
Date: 21 May 2013 09:21 Title: Chapter 2
Oh so many giggles, dear.
Date: 21 May 2013 06:15 Title: Chapter 2
"Och, poor Ensign Carter. We hardly knew ye."
Captain Kirk held up the last of the torn red fabric that once was Ensign Carter's uniform. "Such a sad, sad waste of a young life. Simply tragic."
"Didn't anybody ever tell the fool of a boy that you just can't feed sharks by hand?" Broken words from Dr. McCoy.
Kirk patted his shoulder. "Apparently not, Bones. Apparently not."
Awesome redshirt moment!
Date: 21 May 2013 05:57 Title: Chapter 1
LMAO! Is this a dream? This is hilarious and inspired.
Date: 21 May 2013 03:58 Title: Chapter 2
HAHAHA, a redshirt death! Glorious. Glorious.
Date: 21 May 2013 03:57 Title: Chapter 1
Wow, some three hour tour! Kirk is off his rocker here and how dare he challenge Sulu to a piloting contest! This was fun.
Date: 21 May 2013 03:46 Title: Chapter 2
My God, is the crack strong with this one. The casual mention of Spock's heels cracked me up. Scotty and the coconuts did, too. Captain Kirk, and the red fabric of poor Carter. And man, the shark. It's genius, in a purely cracktastic way, and it makes me laugh.
Date: 20 May 2013 22:06 Title: Chapter 1
LOL! From the story descriptor I thought for a moment this was going to be Trek meets Lost - how very Abhrams of you! Yet no, this is Gilligan's Island! Love the mad notion of it all - from drunken challenges and Sulu flying with his feet to Spock in ginger's high heels. Awesome. You mad funny genius.