Date: 13 Feb 2014 21:52 Title: Chapter 1
Great stuff! Real funny, and so true to character. I can just picture Spock following that scat...
Date: 17 May 2013 18:29 Title: Chapter 1
Yes, yes, yes,. I love the TOS guys and this piece was all TOS, all the time. The interplay between Bones and Kirk was classic, each one acting exactly as they would in that situation. I could hear the alien planet noise in the background while reading this piece (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JSVC3FB_1LA) and was smiling throughout.
Kirk being Kirk, he did nothing in moderation, and he paid for it mightily. The way McCoy and Spock both acknowledged it, but didn't really acknowledge it, was subtle humor at its finest. McCoy's final remark at the end was a classic TOS episode one liner. Roll credits, sound applause. Well done.
Date: 07 May 2013 04:59 Title: Chapter 1
Hilarious. Poor Jim. I love your treatment of these characters. I wish you'd written the new movies. So authentic.
Author's Response: Thank you! I wish I had, too. XD
Date: 05 May 2013 02:58 Title: Chapter 1
that is right on the money. Nicely done with Kirk in particular ringing true (picturing late season 2 Shatner, putting on a few pounds, wearing the green tunic...) Good work. :)
Author's Response: Thanks! I think it would be around there, yeah.
Date: 03 May 2013 14:41 Title: Chapter 1
ROTFL! Short but sweet. Everyone's voice and actions were spot on, and I'm with jespah - Spock following the trail and...other markers was just hilarious. :D
Author's Response: Thank you kindly!
Date: 02 May 2013 15:09 Title: Chapter 1
What I particularly loved was how Spock found them, e. g. the, er, 'trail'. Well done!
Author's Response: Thanks!