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Reviewer: J J Knowles Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jul 2013 11:08 Title: A Simple Truth

I like the ending!

Reviewer: J J Knowles Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jul 2013 16:40 Title: Greetings

Great start to a story that I can see is quite long. This is using the original Star Trek characters in the way they were always meant to be used. I'm looking forward to reading more.

Reviewer: the bluesman Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Aug 2012 06:29 Title: Greetings

I like the...pauses...you use...when Kirk is speaking. And the hint of...attraction between.., Melani and Kirk.

Once again, spot on classic Trek. The timing and pacing are on par with a television script.

Reviewer: RobertScorpio Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Aug 2012 20:13 Title: Greetings

Thanks Bluesman...exactly what I am aiming for indeed.

Reviewer: the bluesman Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Aug 2012 19:57 Title: Greetings

Classic start. Feels like we are watching an episode. You definitely have the feel of the classic Trek intro here.

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