Date: 20 Dec 2013 00:51 Title: Head of Resistance
Sorry, but this feels unfinished to me. Will the Resistance triumph? Will they move their headquarters/location now that Eris and Gul Kellem have discovered it? What was Dolim's role? Did he give Depac up on purpose, knowing that the Cardassians sent to capture/kill him would fail? And what was the purpose od having them find the Resistance leader? Was it a chance for him to embarrass the occupation forces? A way to show them that the Resistance was alive and well, and was guaranteed to make trouble for the Cardassians down the line?
This is intriguing to be sure, but begs to be revisited, have all the loose ends sewn up. Maybe this is due to my unfamiliarity with this particular era in the Trek universe, but I'd like to see a little more resolution here. This has so much potential, it just needs a little more to make it come full circle. Is the tale continued in another story?
Author's Response: Yeah, I acknowledge that it feels unfinished. The resistance movement is something I want to revisit, and they do eventually win as New Xindus is liberated from the Dominion at the end of the war. Here I wanted to give it a proper intro for further battles. His capture of Kellem and Eris was to demonstrate the power of the Resistance and to ensure the Dominion did not under estimate him.
Date: 02 Sep 2012 01:16 Title: Head of Resistance
Hmmm, why did I get the feeling that it would end up with Eris being outwitted once Corr very easily gave up Depac so easily. It was almost like a Vorta being beaten at his or her own game.
Author's Response: Never underestimate the Xindi.
Date: 29 Aug 2012 14:47 Title: Head of Resistance
Ah, finally a setback. I was wondering when you'd have Eris have one.