Reviewer: jespah Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Sep 2013 04:02 Title: Chapter 1

This relationship was always, to me, more one of equals than the one with Jhamel. Jhamel always struck me as vulnerable, with Shran likely in a paternal type of role. But Talas never would be like that.

Very well done; got the characters' voices down perfectly.