Date: 31 Jan 2013 04:29 Title: Chapter 5
Great sequence LN X...You nailed the dialog...and yes, I am revving up a new chapter. But I am re-reading it all and eventually, when I am done...I will continue!!!
Date: 10 Jan 2013 03:15 Title: Chapter 1
Wow...I just re-read this TREKFAN. You really nailed the menacing mood and the dialog PERFECT! As I get set to add a new chapter to this story, I am going to re-read them all. I want to commend you again for getting this story off to a great start!!!
Date: 18 May 2012 07:59 Title: Chapter 8
Wow..great! I loved it...I went back and re-read the other parts and I really think it feels like a movie!!! Can't wait for the next segment! Great use of the EMH!
Date: 02 Apr 2012 23:25 Title: Chapter 7
Wow Jespah...I really liked how you paced this story. I ACTUALLY got goosebumps when you said they all awoke as one! It immediatly gave them what the Borg once had; a scary kick ass creepy vibe!!! Well done...
Author's Response:
Thank you - goosebumps and John Stuart Mill? :)
Date: 01 Apr 2012 20:17 Title: Chapter 1
I dig the sixth chapter, adds a lot more complexity to these androids! Wonder what will happen to Beverly?
Author's Response: Thanks...I am digging what Jespah just wrote...I really like this story!!!
Date: 01 Apr 2012 06:52 Title: Chapter 5
A lot happening in this issue...and you have done a great job moving the story along....I love the intrigue that is happnening in this story!!!
Date: 01 Apr 2012 06:37 Title: Chapter 4
Yes..yes...I'm loving it! This is really getting good...!!! Great job Jean-Luc!
Date: 01 Apr 2012 06:31 Title: Chapter 3
Wow...great segment! The dialog and Lore's personality really shine her Jespah. And this is becoming a very interesting story...
Author's Response:
Thank you! :)
Date: 15 Mar 2012 14:19 Title: Chapter 1
Covers look great...
Date: 14 Mar 2012 23:22 Title: Chapter 1
never mind, figured it out.
Date: 14 Mar 2012 20:40 Title: Chapter 1
my editing / graphiccs won't stick.