[Report This]Date: 01 Jan 2012 11:21 Title: Chapter 1
Phew! Thank God it was a dream, because I could not imagine what Odo did, and just forget about Kira like that! Odo was never one to surrender to desire... At least not to Kira that is.
Author's Response: He didn't forget about her; he told Weyoun, that not everbody "loves/likes" everybody, because he/she belongs to the opposite sex.
Kira was the only person, he loved,but Odo had sex with this woman, he arrested and the female shapeshifter without showing "desire" or being in love with them, so he's capable to do it. He's not limited to liking only Kira.
Date: 31 Dec 2011 15:26 Title: Chapter 1
I am a fan of dream and dream imagery, so I read your story with interest. However, given that it's Weyoun's dream (and apparently is not intended to be a shared nocturnal vision), how is it possible that some of the narration is inside Odo's head? Just a thought - and I'm not sure how that could be addressed.
Author's Response: Weyoun simply imagines Odo's "possible" thoughts at those moments. And on a meta- aspect; If I had written it as Weyoun-POV, it would have been too easy to see that it's his thought/dream etc. and a possible surpise for the reader (> it's not real,lol) would have been gone. So it's a technical thing.