Date: 04 Jan 2015 17:32 Title: Eight
Haha. Always a pleasure to see Levi.
Date: 04 Jan 2015 17:29 Title: Eight
I echo Janeway: temporal mechanics gives me a headache. Sweet scene, though.
Date: 04 Jan 2015 17:27 Title: Eight
Quite a sacrifice. I haven't read your Eriecho stories, but now I'm curious how this all turns out.
Author's Response:
Oh, thanks - I had never (spoiler alert) written H'Shema alive before.
Date: 31 Dec 2014 21:08 Title: Eight
Tommy and Takara conversation is like all of your inter-verse dream conversations always leave people wanting more.
Author's Response:
Oh, thank you!
Date: 24 Dec 2014 16:32 Title: Eight
All these bits and pieces were intriguing. "Human Units", pouch feeders, and a dream pregnancy? And there is something so right about a Klingon butcher. I can just see him in a big white apron, all Worfish, dreaming of pancakes.
Well written.
Author's Response:
Oh, thank you so much! They all come together under the one big banner of family. :)
[Report This]Date: 21 Dec 2014 20:30 Title: Eight
Naughty Otra D’Angelo I am sure she said that just to see Levi reaction.
Still I do like Admiral Carmen Calavicci team have the best parties.
Author's Response:
Oh, I hope so - and poor Levi! All he wants is to just blend into the background.
[Report This]Date: 21 Dec 2014 20:28 Title: Eight
Nice little drabble.
Yes that must be one massive headache to organize the food and seating planning when you have such large family units, still I bet it is a good old knees up once it gets started.
Author's Response:
They're at least cooperative. But man, the noise!!
[Report This]Date: 21 Dec 2014 20:26 Title: Eight
Lol, I do like the humor of your stories Jespah,
Yes the headaches of accidental temporal kick-backs and generational ships.
Author's Response:
Oh, many thanks!
Date: 21 Dec 2014 20:23 Title: Eight
So that how H’Shema and Saddik met and poor Eriecho got her name.
In so few words you recreated that horrible prison of Canamar and show what a little miracle Eriecho is.
Author's Response:
She's one of my fave characters (don't tell the others).
Date: 30 May 2014 00:03 Title: Across the Universe
Hmmm, interesting. And here we go again, warp eight to Sha Ka Ree. I wonder what will happen when Sybok meets Spock-Quinto.
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading!
Date: 14 Feb 2014 19:25 Title: Across the Universe
So this is TFF a la NuTrek. I love.
Author's Response:
Aw, many thanks!
Date: 04 Feb 2014 23:36 Title: Across the Universe
Now that is a very nice conclusion, the wounds are healing in un-expecting way and maybe the future will be better. What a nice way to end, I do hope we get to see Eriecho wedding day.
Author's Response:
At some point, I will write that. Thank you again for your kind reviews.
Date: 04 Feb 2014 23:33 Title: Across the Universe
O that is nicely done Jespah, you’ve manage to fix Spock Prime, Sybok AOS and Eriecho, though I do wonder what Eriecho Prime fate was now.
Eriecho learn the hard lesson and finding that those who care will accept her for who she truly is, suppress emotions or not.
Author's Response:
I don't know what Eriecho Prime would have been like. Probably just your standard Vulcan gal.
Date: 04 Feb 2014 23:27 Title: Across the Universe
Poor Eriecho, she seems to be snapping at her closest friends because of Sybok influence and her own self-doubts. You’ve done a great job of weaving this tale.
Spock Prime vs. AOS Sybok should be…interesting.
Author's Response:
:)
Date: 04 Feb 2014 23:12 Title: Across the Universe
Sybok vs. Eriecho, this is just getting better and better.
Plus the return of T’Bek, who I think you use to great effect to show Eriecho inner turmoil, and the normal Vulcan bad feeling towards the V’tosh Ka’tur.
Author's Response:
Well, it was YOUR idea that Eriecho would be getting suppression training. So, thank you for the plot bunny!!
Date: 04 Feb 2014 22:59 Title: Across the Universe
So the temporal twist of the AOS Butterfly is showing, will we see Sybok and Eriecho together in the near future? Everybody voice sounds right and it’s already better that STV ;-)
Author's Response:
Ha, thank you - I realize the bar was set kinda low.
Date: 04 Feb 2014 22:46 Title: Across the Universe
Oh poor Eriecho, trying to fit in and not just been who she is. Again you’ve done a good and I believe realistic look at how Eriecho time as the sanctuary outsider has began to affect Eriecho self views. Here hoping her friend can reach her in time with the message be yourselves.
Looking forward to the next part.
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: 04 Feb 2014 22:25 Title: Across the Universe
Good opening tease as always, Prose and language use is up to your normal high standards. Looking forward to seeing where this go.
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: 02 Feb 2014 20:49 Title: Across the Universe
Nice neat little resolutions all round here. So good to see Eriecho see a truer path for herself.
Author's Response:
She's learning that her assumptions of what Sollastek wants, and what he needs, aren't necessarily correct.
Date: 02 Feb 2014 20:44 Title: Across the Universe
Aha, so Eriecho is willing to go on the adventure. Sybok has an influence but it does not seem as nearly as nefarious.
Author's Response:
He is definitely different. He's nowhere near as far-gone as he is in canon. So why not go out there and see what there is to see? What could possibly go wrong?
Date: 02 Feb 2014 20:38 Title: Across the Universe
Ha! Great retort. Sybok is bound to be a nuisance on any sanctuary. One wonders if he has a choice here? Is he permitted to leave the sanctuaries of his own violation? Does he have to be with other Vu;lcans simply because they were almost wiped out?
And this might be the wake up call for Ericho. She can choose to reject the suppressing of her emotions.
Author's Response:
To learn that someone is like her, and is so deliberately? That's powerful stuff, for someone who has had so little independence, and been trusted to make so few decisions, in her own life.
Date: 02 Feb 2014 20:06 Title: Across the Universe
A different course seemingly to be followed by Sybok. A more peaceful path chosen. Perhaps for now.
Nice to see Uhura tackle Prime Spock about their prime relationship. She is obviously thrown at the fact none exists as in the NuVerse. More of this scene would have been fantastic. Again, it is a relationship I'd love to see explored in and of itself in a response. Here within the story it has to be briefly touched and glanced over to get on with the main story.
Author's Response:
I realized the story was getting rather long, so unfortunately this piece ended up being shorter than it probably should have been. But I've been wondering why she hasn't asked about this in canon. Why wouldn't she?