[Report This]Date: 29 Aug 2011 13:49 Title: The Opening Move
So far so good!!! It will be an interesting story because we some very different writing styles coming together, which I think, will lead combine to make a unique story!
Date: 29 Aug 2011 08:51 Title: When Opportunity Knocks
Spot on rendering of the Klingons BD! You also somewhat romanticize a few elements like the captain pining over combat and wishing his warship was in far more combat situations.
You also threw in a little explanation of why Klingons in TOS looked so human. It seems there are two types of Klingons, ones whose blood and DNA run pure, and these 'augments', those genetically altered Klingons.
Good job!
[Report This]Date: 29 Aug 2011 03:48 Title: The Opening Move
I really love the way this story is shaping up, great start Mick.
Date: 29 Aug 2011 03:47 Title: When Opportunity Knocks
Love the picture you added, thank you Rob. D-7 is my favorite vessel in trek.
Author's Response: I love the D7 too...can't wait to see where Jespah takes us next!!
[Report This]Date: 28 Aug 2011 21:51 Title: The Opening Move
I like it, slick, humorous (at times) and to the point. I'm not that well versed in the TOS series, but I like this. It introduces newcomers to TOS with ease.
A few punctuation mistakes, but that's fully understandable giving the speed with which this chapter was written up. Finally I would also like to know who the author was to this chapter?
Keep churning out the chapters, and as the Vulcans say 'live long and prosper'
Author's Response: Yes, I just noticed that and MICK's name has been added specifically to Chapter one...and wow I liked it very much!!!
Rob