Date: 05 Aug 2011 08:02 Title: Chapter 4
The arrival of the scouting party was as unexpected as the brutality of the fight that ensued. That was a terrific action sequence. Now, though, I fear Guinan might violate the Prime Directive in one or more ways…
Date: 05 Aug 2011 07:36 Title: Chapter 3
Picard’s decision to allow Guinan to travel to Veridian IV was almost as gutsy as her actions in defense of Adria upon her arrival there. Hopefully, Guinan’s precious gift of a few minutes head start will be enough to keep the lady out of the clutches of the Holy College.
Date: 05 Aug 2011 07:16 Title: Chapter 2
One wonders how many countless skeptics, theologians, and bureaucrats on hundreds of worlds have pursued the same intransigent course with the geniuses of their era? Adria’s only crime was to speak against what was accepted fact, but the powers-that-be will not have their judgment questioned. Adria knows how this will end, but still she won’t surrender her stance and her insistence on what the truth here is. That is true courage.
[Report This]Date: 05 Aug 2011 05:58 Title: Chapter 1
Oh, terrific setup! I always enjoy it when a writer expands on an existing story, and Generations left a great many loose threads just begging to be explored.
Date: 03 Aug 2011 20:35 Title: Chapter 1
How fascinating. Time to read more....
Date: 02 Aug 2011 22:24 Title: Chapter 1
Oh...and yes I know this doesn't take place on Earth. But one can read the events on Veridian IV and easily apply them to earth circa 1400s
[Report This]Date: 02 Aug 2011 22:23 Title: Chapter 1
I have read parts one and two David, and this is a very well written story. I dare say it is novel quality good. You have done a great job, IMO, of showing us what it would have been like for the early Astromoners on ths world during their struggles with "the spoken word". I am heading to part three now...keep it up!!!
Author's Response: Thank you for the kind words, Robert! Luckily our own late-medieval astronomers didn't have to witness any firefights between alien vessels -- that we know of. That left them more time to fight the inquisitors.